Matt Bellamy

Hey! I like that you've added more imagery to this. One thing I would change is "hurry, save the last bit that lingers!" to make it sound a little less...dramatic, ...

Zomg, awesome pic of everyone, Mesh! :D Whee!

Mistakes in time like Scribbles in concrete Careless sweeps and Scuffed footprints. Memories are more than Names written on Dust-covered table tops, But like etchings on wood In permanent marker. ...

Hello! Firstly, sorry if I say anything which is repeating anyone else; reading other people's reviews deterrs me if they've already said what I was thinking. The first stanza is ...

Its 9pm in the UK.

One of my first reviews, posted on 8th December 2004: Good. Not really my thing, but I specifically liked the last two lines of the first stanza and the last ...

I'm glad there's only one. I mean, if there were male and female toilets, I don't know which one I should use. o_O

Save it. Or spend a little and save loads of it. You never know when you might need it.

I am overwhelmed by my greeting skills in this thread. If you ever greet anyone, remember my post above - I have most certainly set the standard.

badbadz - marry me?

I really like the description in this and the images it puts in my mind. However, who is "he"? He is only mentioned once, is he important? The second stanza ...

I love how you formatted the words at the beginning to look like stairs! Also, the slow progression of describing the character. It is very difficult to write in second ...

New hair! :D Friiiiiinge! Or bangs, as you Americans might say. xD

Wahey! :D *feels special*

Something neat for YWS and my messy C++ notes. :)